Deadly Ink 2010

July 26th, 2010

Just wanted to recap this year’s Deadly Ink Conference, which took place at the Sheraton Parsippany in NJ. As usual, it offered a lively mix of entertaining presentations, helpful information for both writers and readers, and general networking and bonding among all concerned.

Friday night’s Deadly Dessert Party introduced Guest of Honor Gillian Roberts, author of the award-winning Amanda Pepper mystery series, and Toastmaster (mistress?) Cheryl Solimini, author of the novel ACROSS THE RIVER from Deadly Ink Press.

I started Saturday off by attending the panel, “What Makes It a Mystery?” M. E. Kemp acted as moderator, as E. J. Rand, Ilene Schneider, Gillian Roberts and Hallie Ephron dissected the variations among mysteries, from cozies to thrillers. Ephron recommended that aspiring writers should learn “what’s cliché in your subgenre.” Rand and Roberts, who both write sleuth characters who meet and marry within their series, discussed mixing mystery and romance. Ephron noted, “In many mysteries, there’s the story of the detective and the story of how he or she solves the crime. In the story of the detective, romance can play a part.”

I stuck with Hallie Ephron for her workshop on “Writing Suspense.” She defined suspense as “the potential for something bad to happen—that moment before something bad happens, or doesn’t happen.” She advised building tension by “slowing down” the writing, and distinguished between the “false payoff,” where something innocuous happens, versus the “true payoff,” where something dramatic occurs. She read a taut scene by Dick Francis that built suspense through pure description, with no clue as to the protagonist’s physical or emotional reactions.

Next, novelist and retired forensic psychologist Rick Helms gave a workshop on “Inductive and Deductive Profiling.” He said much of what we see demonstrated in movies and TV is inductive profiling that generalizes about a group of people to catch one individual. In reality, he said, this is a flawed approach. It’s more effective to use deductive profiling based on evidence from the crime scene and the behavior of that individual criminal. He gave examples of many well-known serial killers who did not fit the typical FBI profile.

During lunch, Deborah Buchanan announced the novels nominated for the 2010 David G. Sasher Sr. Award. The authors who were present, Mary Jane Clark and Hallie Ephron, talked a bit about their nominated books. Then Cheryl Solimini interviewed Gillian Roberts, who related how she “graduated” from teaching high school English to writing fiction full-time. Christine Abbott also announced that there had been a “murder” at the conference, of a famous mystery author named Stephanie King. She pointed out certain key players and suspects (including yours truly) and encouraged the other attendees to question us closely during the con.

In the afternoon, I took part in the “Crossing Genres” panel with Sheila York and Elena Santangelo, moderated by Roberta Rogow. The predominant mix seemed to be mystery/paranormal (Santangelo and I) and mystery/history (York, Rogow and Santangelo). We all seemed to feel that crossing genres came naturally to us and enhanced our stories, although at times it did seem to baffle prospective publishers.

Meanwhile, author and detective Joe Paglino conducted a two-part workshop called “Whodunit: 101 Mistakes Mystery Writers Make,” including slides of real crime scenes. Another program highlighted “Sleuths We Love, in Print and on Screen.”

Following this, Irene Fleming screened some intriguing vintage mystery films in the Morris Room, while Sisters in Crime/Central Jersey hosted a getting-to-know-you tea in the Troy Hills Room.

At the Saturday night awards dinner, Gillian Roberts delivered a speech she’d prepared five years ago, when she had to cancel her appearance at Deadly Ink due to illness. She talked about feeling her way into mystery writing in the early 1960s, when the genre still received little respect. (She admitted, “I was one of the few women of my generation who never read Nancy Drew.”)

Sunday morning, I moderated the panel “Writing as the Opposite Sex” — a hoot, because the five other panelists were all male! Steve Rigolosi complained that male characters written by women are rarely same the type that men admire. I said I also felt that way about many female characters written by male authors. It soon became a (mostly humorous) battle of the sexes!

At lunch, “detective” Ilene Schneider interviewed several of the suspects in the conference murder, including me. I expressed such open hostility towards the deceased, and evasiveness about my whereabouts at the time of the murder, that I guess everyone figured I must be innocent.

Because my Sunday afternoon panel on “Authors Who Live in NJ But Set Stories in Other Locales” drew no interest whatsoever, I and my fellow panelists swelled the audience for the competing panel, “Creating Characters: Qualities of Heroes and Villains.” Hey, if you can’t beat ‘em…! Among the highlights, Gillian Roberts admitted she had fictionally “killed off” a real person she knew and disliked, and added, “It was a wonderful experience — he truly deserved it.” Rick Helms quoted John D. MacDonald in saying, “There are no 100-percent heroes,” and added that the same should be true of villains.

Finally, both post- and pre-published writers who had the stamina to stay a bit longer joined in a roundtable. We discussed our publication experiences, favorite underrated authors, flakiest suggestions we’ve gotten from editors and most outrageous rejection stories.

Oh yes, and a vote determined that Jeff Markowitz -– or at least, his alter ego – had killed Stephanie King.

It was a fun weekend, which needed only a few more participants among mystery readers. If you enjoy mysteries, put Deadly Ink 2011 on your calendar and please spread the word among your friends!

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ONE BLOOD Comes Out in September!

June 13th, 2010

Sorry for not posting in a long time, but I’ve been polishing my sixth novel, ONE BLOOD. I sent it to my publisher, and got word this week that it has been accepted for publication this September. (Ah, the joy of a small publishing house and POD–no waiting a year or more to see the book in print!)

Each books that comes out feels like a different type of “success” for me, and this one is no exception. ONE BLOOD is a much-updated version of the very first novel I wrote after I graduated from college…and that was a lo-o-o-ong time ago, believe me! Over the years it’s also gone by the name NO SUCH THING and BLOOD OF MY BLOOD. As you can probably tell, it’s a vampire novel–sort of vampire/romantic suspense. It’s also a prequel to the first novel I had published with Amber Quill Press, DANCE WITH THE DRAGON.

Here’s the saga: I first came up with two characters as near-opposites, destined to have major, life-and-death conflicts from the beginning. What could bring them together? For one thing, a common need to be accepted for themselves, without hiding their true natures. For another, a common enemy.

As with many of my books, the setting also plays a big role. My cousin Phil McCabe, a year older and in some ways like a brother to me, attended Princeton University. When I visited the campus, I was knocked out by its Gothic character. This was at the end of my college years, when I was already starting to write paranormal fiction, and Princeton seemed like an irresistible setting. Also a good one for a couple of brilliant, well-traveled and sophisticated characters!

As I said, I wrote a couple of versions of this novel, each time sending it to agents and publishers. But back then, nobody was writing contemporary vampire romances, and even I started to feel it lacked something. So I tabled it and used the same hero and heroine in DANCE WITH THE DRAGON. This was a straight-ahead thriller, but their relationship still intrigued readers. I had one reviewer and a couple of readers tell me they wished the knew more about the two main characters, and one said, “It almost seems like there should be an earlier book.”

My initial reaction? “Been there, done that, no way!” Ah, but then I noticed the vast number of contemporary vamp romances proliferating. Mine fell into that general category, but was also different in many key ways. So I decided to give it another shot.

I thought reworking the old novel would be a breeze. I never realized how hard it would be to get these two characters together, in a way that synced up with DD, and in a way readers would believe! Since writing DD, I’d learned a lot more about them, and they were both very strong personalities. This time around they had MAJOR issues, and I had to play “couples counselor” in a big way!

But it’s done now, and I think I’ve succeeded. And I’m so happy it’s coming out before October, because this story is tailor-made for Halloween. It even has a pivotal scene at a campus Halloween party and a bloody demise on Halloween night!

Watch this space for future developments…

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Book Discussion at Riverdale Library

April 27th, 2010

Had a great time last night visiting with the Book Discussion Group at the Riverdale Public Library here in NJ! I approached the library a few months back about having a discussion of my latest book, DANU’S CHILDREN. Margaret O’Keefe, who moderates the group, actually had them check out summaries of all my books from my Web site. They chose instead to read one of my older books, BLACK FLOWERS–which happens to be the only one so far set in NJ. So I said, fine, always happy to get more exposure for BF, too!

I joined them for the discussion last night, with the bonus of some great pot-luck food. I was delighted to see it was a big group, about 15 people, and very enthusiastic. Margaret made my night by stating up front that of all the books they’d read by local authors so far, they liked mine the best!

Everybody had interesting questions, and it turned into more of a Q&A session with me. We got into all the themes of the book–genetic engineering, childhood autism and corporate group-think. While I was explaining my admiration for Ira Levin and comparing BF to THE STEPFORD WIVES, even I had a new insight–that the end has something in common with the end of ROSEMARY’S BABY! So you can always learn something new from your readers.

I almost would have preferred to be a fly on the wall, though, to hear what they’d have said about the book if I wasn’t there. I tried, in turn, to get a feel for what they liked and didn’t like, and how they’d interpreted certain things. I talked about how I came up with the concept for the book, some of the same information that’s on the Background page of my Web site. And I sold six books to the group members afterward–two copies of BF, two of DANCE WITH THE DRAGON, one of DANU’S CHILDREN and one of RIDE A DANCING HORSE.

In all, it was a fun and well-organized event. The Riverdale library is small but seems very active. The local residents were asked to sign cards protesting the state cuts in library services, which were being sent to Trenton today. I was only sorry I wasn’t in their district and couldn’t legally sign one. In today’s economic climate, it’s a terrible time to cut funding for libraries!

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New Novel

March 7th, 2010

I got snowed in again at the end of February, for a day and a half, but I was able to make some progress at home on the rewrite of ONE BLOOD and get started on HEX, DEATH & ROCK ‘N’ ROLL.

Last Friday I had a fun experience, doing a phone interview with a director and producer of rock and rap videos. In HD & RnR, I have a suspicious accident taking place during the shooting of a rock video in an old movie theater that’s under renovation, and I needed to make sure the details were believable. A friend put me in touch with Mario Cosatbile, a video producer based in Paramus, NJ, and he was kind enough to give me some inside information. I ran the whole scenario by him to make sure that, overall, it sounded realistic, and then we talked over some particulars about what the director, the band and the cameramen would be likely to be doing at various points.

I enjoy researching my books, because it brings them more to ife in my mind. When I need a certain kind of setting and find that just the right place exists, or I need a plot twist and an expert confirms that yes, it could happen that way, it feels like kismet. Or sometimes what I first envisioned won’t work, but I discover something reality-based that will work better! That’s even more of a rush.

I have a problem now, because I really want to polish ONE BLOOD to be “the best it can be,” but I’m also getting psyched over HD & RnR. Plus, I have to get my tax material together for my accountant before March 23! Way too much stuff to cram into my alleged “spare time”!

All day Saturday, I’ll be involved with the Liberty States Fiction Writers “Create Something Magical!” conference at the Renaissance Hotel in Iselin, NJ. In the morning I’m on a horror panel with Garden States Horror Writers colleague Gary Frank and best-selling author F. Paul Wilson–great company! In the afternoon I’m introducing a panel on “Working with a Publicist,” and in between I’ll be signing books. It promises to be a long but fun day. This is the first conference for LSFW, and they’lve already got 127 attendees committed.

That’s it for now. I just realized the Oscars are on and I’d like to catch a little of them before I have to turn in. I always miss the really good awards at the end…!

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Let It Snow, Let It Snow…

February 10th, 2010

I made it up to Scranton and back with no issues last Saturday, and spent a nice afternoon at Possibilities Books & Gifts. I sold and signed a few copies of DANU’S CHILDREN, and gave out a few more bookmarks, during the store’s annual open house. Meanwhile, owner Gina Pace did non-stop Tarot card readings in the next room, someone else did Reiki therapy, they sold discounted and used books, and at one point there was even a Middle Eastern Dance demo! A lot going on, all to a background of soothing New Age music. And I got back home without hitting any deer on the highway (my second biggest driving fear, next to being stuck in a snow bank).

Today I’m snowed in at home. It’s so bad here that even my boss isn’t going to the office, and he’s a trouper! My colleague Antoinette and I got a lot of work done ahead last night for the weekly section, so we should have no trouble finishing up tomorrow. But this being a newspaper, we definitely will have to get in there tomorrow!

Meanwhile, I plan to finish reading through my first draft of ONE BLOOD and making editing notes (almost done with that). I also want to work on another short scene for my next Quinn Matthews book, HEX, DEATH AND ROCK ‘N’ ROLL, so I have something to read to my critique group next week.

It’s a bit of a challenge to get my head out of the last book and into this one, because they’re so different. ONE BLOOD, though ultimately a romance, is pretty dark; it’s also multiple-viewpoint and a thriller. HD&RnR, though it’s a murder mystery and someone dies early on, will be a bit lighter with pop-cultural elements, and it’s almost all first-person from Quinn’s viewpoint. Through her job writing about architecture and interior design for her local paper, she witnesses a suspicious “accident” while a rock band is shooting a video in an old movie theater. Being psychic, Quinn’s the only one who thinks it might be the work of a ghost. When word of this gets back to the band’s singer, he asks her to do some investigating, because he believes he’s being stalked by someone who’s put a curse on him. So Quinn gets pulled into a unfamiliar world of rock’n'roll jealousies and business machinations, and discovers a lot of characters who have issues with the singer and the band. But could any of them throw a curse that resulted in someone being killed? (Since this is one of my books, you know the answer is, “Probably”!)

Sounds like I’ve got a lot of work ahead of me. I’d better stop blogging and start writing! And to all my fellow Jerseyans, if you can, stay home today and don’t try to drive!

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Return to Scranton!

January 30th, 2010

Weather permitting, I will be going back to Scranton, Pa., next Saturday (2/6) for an Open House at the New Age bookstore Possibilities. Apparently they hold this event for all their authors every year on Super Bowl weekend. Maybe the assumption is that people who like New Age stuff and like to read aren’t into football? Anyway, I expect to be there 1-5 p.m. Possibilites has been carrying DANU’S CHILDREN for a couple of months now, and I will be bringing up more copies to sell and sign.

The location is especially appropriate because my experiences visiting my mother’s relatives in Wilkes-Barre and going to college in Scranton inspired me to write DC. I always had a sense that people in that Lackawanna Valley region lived kind of in their own world. The coal boom and subsequent bust really left a mark on the place geographically and psychologically. At the time I attended college up there, Scranton was very blighted and many storefronts and other buildings downtown were empty. Meanwile, slag heaps left over from the mining days would smoke and burn in the night (spontaneous combustion of the gases), giving off sulphurous fumes…now and then a 7-11 would sink into the ground due to mine subsidence…and my friends from town would tell me about a huge Catholic church that once slid several feet downhill until the parishoners “miraculously” stopped it with a novena. Since I already had an interest in writing paranormal thrillers, I stored all that material away for future use!

On the other hand, living as I now do in a slightly more rural part of New Jersey, I also wanted to write something about the wonder and power of nature, and the need to respect the natural world…or else! I thought northeastern Pa. would be the perfect place to set a man-versus-nature story. And in this case (spoiler alert) nature wins!

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Market Research

January 24th, 2010

I’m also starting a blog on Live Journal and I’m planning to link it with this one. Meanwhile, maybe you can help me with a little market research!

If you’ve been reading this blog, some of this background will be familiar–I just finished a draft of a paranormal romantic suspense novel, ONE BLOOD. It is a prequel to my first published book, DANCE WITH THE DRAGON, so the events in this book have to sync up with the start of that one. Unfortunately, that book was written around 2000, and certain details about current events and popular technology may seem out of date now. My publisher says re-issuing the book would be a problem, which I understand, so I’m thinking of setting the prequel a couple of years earlier, in the late 1990s.

My question to prospective readers: If you picked up a “thriller” novel and read on the flyleaf that it was deliberately set in the late 1990s–with a suggestion that the story arc would eventually take the characters into the post-9/11 era–would that intrigue you or turn you off? Would you think, “Why would I want to read a book set in the near-past that isn’t ‘historical’?” Or would you judge it strictly on the basis of the story, the writing, etc.?

I’d appreciate honest feedback! Thanks.

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Progress on Perilious Prequel

January 16th, 2010

So far, I am thinking of setting ONE BLOOD in 1996-7. I’ve even printed out calendars of those years. 1996 syncs up especially well with the days on which I have things happening in the book–for example, I have Halloween falling on a Thursday, so that it’s followed by one work day. But those things aren’t crucial…

If I continue with this approach, the tricky thing will be to avoid anachronisms, and make sure I don’t have buildings in existence in Princeton that weren’t built yet (such as the big, new public library downtown, which only dates from 2004) or technology too advanced for the period. Just as it was hard for me to envision rampant cell phone and laptop use in 2000, it’s hard for me to remember NOT to include some of those things now.

One question I can throw out, to those who might have still been in college in 1996-7, or had kids in college then: Would some Ivy League students already be using laptops in the classroom, or would they still be taking notes mostly by hand? (Even if you didn’t go to that kind of school, you can probably guess whether wealthy kids would have had access to those things.) Thanks for any tips you can give me!

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Prequel Perils

January 10th, 2010

So, I’m almost done with a solid first draft of ONE BLOOD, my prequel to DANCE WITH THE DRAGON (one chapter left to read to my critique group), and I decide to reread DD. Mind you, by the time one of my books comes out, I’ve committed a lot of it to memory. On the other hand, DD was the first book I had published, back in 2003, and it was submitted to Amber Quill a year before that.

Therein lie some of the challenges. A lot has happened in the world over the past seven years. I have had readers comment to me that DD is a bit behind the times in technology. The most glaring example is when a cassette tape falls out of a boom box! Street kids may still carry boom boxes (better for annoying the people around them than an iPod), but today it would have a CD, at least. Also, when a victim is kidnapped there’s no mention of whether she tries to use a cell phone.

I was aware of these glitches, but in rereading, I discovered some others. I mentioned PEAR, a psychic-research organization that existed at the time in Princeton but has since downsized and changed its name. In OB, I gave it a completely fictional name. And the explanation that my heroine gives to someone for how she ended up living and working with the hero is different from what I have done in ONE BLOOD.

Now you could say, why don’t you just make it exactly the same as in DD? Because the way I’m doing it in OB works a lot better!

A while back, I mentioned some of the glitches to my editor and publisher, and asked about revising DD for future editions. They told me it would be a lot of trouble, pretty much like publishing a whole new book. My editor suggested that I set OB in an earlier time period, too, so that both could be read as set around the Millenium.

At first I didn’t like that idea, but now I’m mulling some version of it. I thought of putting a disclaimer at the beginning of OB, saying that it is set two years before DD, around “the turn of the 21st century.” I will mention that readers who go on to DD will find some discrepencies between the name of the psychic institute and the explanation that the heroine gives for how she hooked up with the hero. Seems to me that would cause the least disruption.

Any thoughts? Alternate suggestions?

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Productive Holiday

December 28th, 2009

Although I celebrated Christmas a bit beforehand and a bit afterward, I spent Friday and Saturday on my own. This was not a bad thing for a couple of reasons: 1) I was nursing a cold, and I probably got over it more quickly because I didn’t have to do anything too strenuous, and 2) I had time to wrap up the first draft of ONE BLOOD and really think about what I was doing. The second-to-last scene, in particular, required some additional research and choices about where to set it, etc.

I’m happy to say that I think the ending hits the mark. This book has been a balancing act between paranormal thriller and romance, leaning toward the first most of the time. It does wind up on a more romantic note at the end, but I want to keep a sense of black humor.

On Jan. 6, I go back to my critique group with the second-to-last chapter. Before the end of the month, they’ll have let me know if I’m on the right track. Then, then rewriting…!

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